Driftwood (Luc Bat)
Weve drifted beyond reachlonely wood on a beach of tearsmisshapen by lifes fears,accumulated years of paingrounded by tides againworn down by driving rain, fierce breeze,relentless, tossing...
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Dear Etain,This poem is intense mainly due to your use of fresh language. I love the line "lonely wood on a beach of tears."Keep writing! Great job!Best,Tamara
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Sometimes there is a temptation with Luc Bat to fall into a staccato rhythm or make it sound childish or "Hallmarkish". You have avoided this and instead used a metaphor that creates a mood of sadness...
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Hey there whipper napper.. *hehe*I have another for you.. This was a pearla.
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lovely images...the sea seems to be present at all the places I visit...grin!
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Tamara - Thank you!!! I like pushing the boundaries of language and seeing how creative I can be without falling into a pile of ridiculous. Teagan - Thank you muchly old man. hehehe I'm not a great...
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